because the Singapore government Spelling - attributed, "economy progression" - not very clear what is meant. You do not need to refer to the figure twice. ..of Hong Kong Mojo and they peaked ...Hong Kong andas people Yet - does not fit well here. Instead - 'after 1997..' ..However some of them (who? Better to write 'staff') shown their concern about three aspects. ..which results in More details needed of the implications.How does old software cause inconvenience? dissatisfied / unsatisfactory It appears to be because of the old Most of them (who?) Spelling: slightly
1. Describing and Discussing a Graph.
Profits in Singapore
As is shown in figure 1, initially profits of Mojo in Singapore increased gradually and became stable in the following year. This was because Singapore government introduced a favorable taxation policy in the early 1990s. However, this was followed by a steady decline until 2001. The reason for this was attribiuted to economy progression in Malaysia which caused competition in the region.
Profits in Hong Kong
According to figure 1, there was a consistent growth in profits of Hong Kong Mojo and peaked in 1997. The possible cause of this was the prehandover boom in Hong Kong and people were optimistic about the economy. Yet, Profits of Mojo in Hong Kong dropped quite sharply and hit a trough in 1999. This appears to have been due to the post handover depression. Fortunately, profits rebounded until 2001 due to the growth of China market and its open-door policy.
1. Describing and Discussing a Table
In order to improve the working conditions at head office, a survey was done on seven aspects, including lighting, thermal comfort, air quality, office furniture, decoration, equipment and pantry. Most of them scored a high satisfaction rate among both senior and junior staff. However some of them shown their concern about three aspects.
Equipment
Although most of the senior staff were satisfied with computers, only one fourth of junior staff were happy with this aspect. This is because all of the junior staff are still using the old version of computer software, which result in much inconvenience to their daily work.
Office furniture
Three quarters of senior staff were contented with office furniture, but more than half of junior staff were unsatisfied with this aspect. It appears to be the old and uncomfortable computer chairs. Most of them complained about backpain and there was an increase number of sick leave application.
Pantry
Slghtly more than half of both senior and junior staff felt that the pantry is in a good condition. This is attribute to the dirty
because the Singapore government
Spelling - attributed,
"economy progression" - not very clear what is meant.
You do not need to refer to the figure twice.
..of Hong Kong Mojo and they peaked
...Hong Kong and as people
Yet - does not fit well here. Instead - 'after 1997..'
..However some of them (who? Better to write 'staff') shown their concern about three aspects.
..which results in
More details needed of the implications.How does old software cause inconvenience?
dissatisfied / unsatisfactory
It appears to be because of the old
Most of them (who?)
Spelling: slightly
1. Describing and Discussing a Graph.
Profits in Singapore
As is shown in figure 1, initially profits of Mojo in Singapore increased gradually and became stable in the following year. This was because Singapore government introduced a favorable taxation policy in the early 1990s. However, this was followed by a steady decline until 2001. The reason for this was attribiuted to economy progression in Malaysia which caused competition in the region.
Profits in Hong Kong
According to figure 1, there was a consistent growth in profits of Hong Kong Mojo and peaked in 1997. The possible cause of this was the prehandover boom in Hong Kong and people were optimistic about the economy. Yet, Profits of Mojo in Hong Kong dropped quite sharply and hit a trough in 1999. This appears to have been due to the post handover depression. Fortunately, profits rebounded until 2001 due to the growth of China market and its open-door policy.
1. Describing and Discussing a Table
In order to improve the working conditions at head office, a survey was done on seven aspects, including lighting, thermal comfort, air quality, office furniture, decoration, equipment and pantry. Most of them scored a high satisfaction rate among both senior and junior staff. However some of them shown their concern about three aspects.
Equipment
Although most of the senior staff were satisfied with computers, only one fourth of junior staff were happy with this aspect. This is because all of the junior staff are still using the old version of computer software, which result in much inconvenience to their daily work.
Office furniture
Three quarters of senior staff were contented with office furniture, but more than half of junior staff were unsatisfied with this aspect. It appears to be the old and uncomfortable computer chairs. Most of them complained about backpain and there was an increase number of sick leave application.
Pantry
Slghtly more than half of both senior and junior staff felt that the pantry is in a good condition. This is attribute to the dirty